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Old 10-27-06, 05:04 PM   #9
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Around here you're looked up to? ab0ve, you best show or I'll boot you
But with that being said ^.....I guess that I am just doing what you do
I don't like it, but in all honesty its not that bad, I think you coulda made this hit harder without the lil arrow thing
On second thought dude, I don't see anybody liking ya, it's blatant ho
Spanish speakers will know who wins when I go around saying "Yo"
See I know what it means in spanish, but the reality of it is, your not speaking spanish, this is english, and well its just not to effective of a diss against him, just seemed like you rushed it, and jus threw in there whatever Woulda been better if it was like you know its above tho, or somthing other than a spanish concept lofl.

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Fuck up, cuz ur just a young faggot who sucks
I mean we all know rap isn't for the ages of 8 and above
Dope man, I liked this, creative and witty
Now to elevate in rap, n' learn how to drop a hot track
I'd say see the above punch, but that'd only show how to drop wack
coo nameplay and diss to him, it was effective compared to his

Imma go with DTH on this for coming original and that first line made me lol, his second made me smirk a bit. Above, word your shit better, like I stated.

v. DaTrusHurtz
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