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Old 10-28-06, 02:53 AM   #5
Zach Warden
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From: Kokomo, IN
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verse 1 comes in nicely. lyrics are good, flows good. i like this. chorus is too repetitive in my opinion. sounds nice vocal wise. verse 2 is str8, not near as good as the first, you lose you flow an get a word off in the middle of it. i dont like how verse 3 starts off, but u make up for that with the verse.

nice shit

rtf please = )
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