guess ima say it again...


beat is cool...i like it...shud have put some intrumental at the begining instead of the it just starting like that,its kinna shocking cos i had my speakers a lil up mayne,think of those with them headphones,lol...lyrics are alright..seems real aint no 'metaz' and stuff..flow is pretty simple no switch(shud have dont that a lil in verse 2) in it but works with the beat and atmosphere created..yeah hooks are cool i liked the dubs u put in the first 1 shud have stuffed in a lil more in the second so it wud just outro like that...mixing was just iight aint nothing wrong with that...u got a gd quality and cool delivery...your presence on this piece was just on point..lil ups and down in 'em according to the lyrics...thats gd!..this is the kinna track i'd listen to when i wanna relax and reflect a lil on my life...pretty tight!...

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