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honestly i hate when people sample songs in beats
verse - haha damn sounds like dipset..adlibs add a little more to the track so thats cool. flow is too much like that. but its something new from you so thats cool. just a little boring. i like how you up your emotion in the middle of the verse. some of the adlibs go a little high though.
hook - your hook reminds me of ghostface. your adlibs are cool cause if they werent there it would be really plain
verse 2 - again with that same flow. not really any switches so its kinda predictable. lyrics are average. nothing stands out too much. i like that part about the islam religion though. so thats cool. again you up your emotion a little with that "damn" adlib. i like the concept of this though.
hook - sounds alright. just a little empty. maybe some adlibs. or something to add to it.
overall it works. the only problem i would say is that last hook is very empty and plain. good job
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