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Old 10-28-06, 01:56 PM   #7
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HAHAHAHA!!! kinda scary

intro works. i guess.

beat is cool. i always liked this beat.

haha..i like how you kicked this off. good prescence. i like how you did this. delivery is real cool. this sounds like some straight mixtape stuff.

hook is kinda played. sounds kinda...not good.

verse 2 kinda fell off from the first. lyrics are better though.


honestly this is a cool song. nothing i would listen to personally. it actually sounds like this song was just for fun or a joke or something. the one thing i did like was how you switched up the flow and didnt bore me with the same one throughout the song.
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