Listening...
Beat is meh...
Blahhh at the quality, but you already mentioned this on AIM.
Flow was good, the concept was creative...lyrics were good too, but the quality just hurts the delivery and the listenability of the song.
Get a new mic stat man lol.
Decent though. Keep it up.
RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236476