why so serious!!??
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IP:
first off structure was horrible sorry but it was..work on that
second off ur rhyming REALLY REALLY basic wordz up ur rhyming scheme
3rd off make it more interesting it got boring fast
im not gonna rate this cuz i dont wanna hurt ur feelings lol
but try ur best ta elevate some and become better
RTF on mine wit honest feed back it called "hip hops cemetary" holla
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