um..hook i dont really like it...there's something up with it cant figure out what it is,but the 'im so sick' is quite catchy!
lyrics are personal,i can tell u comeing from ur heart
your emotion on this was pretty adequate
your delivery is pretty good and ur quality is good too
i like the beat,your flow was quite simple,but u sipped off at some spots, imo shu be due to no enuff confidence..


this was a gd one tho..ur best i've heard so far!

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