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I don't lose
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haha, a skinny sounding dzk....ha okay sorry...the hook needs to flow better, and your breathing control....too many deep breaths id say just silence those, n re-do the hook n its solid.....yep
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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