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Old 10-30-06, 09:40 PM   #9
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Voted For: KiD IcKriS™

Dude you suck..
DONT START BATTLES LIKE THAT
You have no skills, and not chancing of winning you lame..
Cuz you could only capatilize.. when you were typin your name
BAD SET UP LINE COULDA BEEN WORDED BETTER DECENT PUNCH 2ND LINE
Punch after punch, i'm connecting with jabs..
That'll leave kid more fucked up.. then child molesting dads..
1ST LINE PLAYED AS HELL 2ND LINE EH OK I GUESS
Your a fucking newb, and you'll easily be whored...
Cuz all of RV is above U..
....................................like 7 and 8 on your keyboard
1ST LINE WHACK 2ND LINE NO CONNECTION ON THE PUNCH THERE'S SOME PRETTY WHACK FOLKS ON THIS SITE AND WHY IS 7 AND 8 MORE SPECIAL THAN ANY OTHER BUTTON LIKE F1 AND F2


Work on your set up lines and your vocab get some harder punches you'll elevate


Tha problem with coke today..is its never pure
sorta liek yah rap verses..i can tell they never were
OK OPENER GETTIN SOME NAME PLAY BUT WHAT YOU MEAN HIS VERSES AREN'T PURE BE MORE SPECIFIC MENTION A GHOSTWRITER OR SAY HE BIT HIS VERSE
in other words..yah better werk..harder an trainer faster
befor you dare accept challenges..from great masters
HYPIN YOURSELF UP ISN'T A PUNCH OR DISS DONT DO THIS IN BATTLES
no time fa play basterd..yah moms..ill break backwards
yousa plain rapper..even get murked with a verse more scattered..then brain matter
MOM JOKES ARE PLAYED SECOND LINE IS STRETCHED BUT YOU HAD MULTIS WHICH HE DIDNT

Don't self glorify yourself in battles it wastes lines that could have been used dissin him also spell things right it looks better like ''yah'' looks better as ''your'' in my opinion.

V/ Kid do to better vocab and multis and tried gettin personal not much to Coke's verse
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