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Old 11-01-06, 02:34 PM   #13
Ace Heratoga
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Iight listening

You kinda came in awkward but once the beat drops your on point...

Flow is straight for like 95% of the time but there's a few spots during your verses it seems like you speed up some of words to fit em in, just something I noticed... do it myself lol

Emotion is dope... sound sincere

Lyrically the first 2 verses we're better than the final verse IMO the last verse was mad basic

Coo lil track bro

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236641
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