LoL wtf @ the intro... that was weird as hell...

Iight... Beats simple but perfect since you just plan on spittin

Whoa man... breath control... i can hear like every breath you take...

Flow seems mad forced lyrics are cool, but your just kinda throwing multis together it seems like

2nd Verses flow bit better than the first but the 2nd half is kinda ehhh again

DAMN you did it again on the last verse lol, you started off nice than you switch it up and it sounds forced mang...

but LMAO @ "Mmmmmmmmmm kaaayyy"

you got your own swager and shit which is cool... but you really need to work on a constient flow

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