... nah man... yous can't say that... whack!... nah... yo man, I think you got Dislexia or something^... reading the shit backwards and shit...

Yo kid, you actually came up strong on the first verse, had some nice rhymes, tight flow, good multies and shit, it had a good rhythm... but then u slupped a bit on the second, some of those rhymes didn't make sence... I liked this one though> "only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections//" that was a funny one... keep writing dawg...

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