ok ok.....beat is coo....im feelin this....its more for the emotional focus

u stayed on topic.....thats whats up
flow and emotion was ur key aspects that stood out the most to me..... didnt sound like u were strugglin......so it sounded easy......emotion was good in pretty much all the places

now...lyrically it didnt strike me hard as far as lines.....but the concept overall was coo..... feelin it....def hip hop...got a good voice and good mic presence