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Old 11-03-06, 02:51 AM   #10
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Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
You shouldnt even be playing.. Son i'll break your mouth..
Cause when my knife sliced you
................You Bledsoe much they had to take him out...
Playing for New England.. son, its not much of a task..
Cause now we know you wont throw NE touchdown pass

^ not all your punches related to peyton manning.. but i quoted two that didn't so they were pretty good. i especially liked the bledsoe wordplay.. pretty fresh. your wording almost killed the NE line for me, and i think you could've used the branch shit a lot better but i liked your verse.

vs.

look at this redneck! u live in a double wide and theres no doubting
cuz his trailor attracts more gay dudes then Brokeback Mountain
you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
Have all that offensive talent around you but still your so far away
cuz the ring scares him more then that movie that kills u in 7 days

^ i think you focussed too much on him not winning superbowls. the edge line could've been cool.. but i wasn't feeling the gay take you had on it. the Ty Law line would've worked a lot better for me if he had broke any of those laws.. seemed like you were reaching a bit.


i got y'all tied on qoutables.. but i'ma have to edge this to cocaine. bit of an upset i guess.. but i was feelin his quotables a bit more, and his verse as a hole outside of what i quoted.

v/ Cocaine. entertaining read dudes.. hit up my battle with wyte.
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