I don't lose
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you did relaly good on this lyrics n flow wise for real, the only craticisim i have on this is you start to sound a lil too animated, like your more joking then being serious but then go back to being serious....i unno, thats all but yea keeping your shit upped.....rtf on my random verse
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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