You talkin to who kid? You soft so stop talking hard on a computer
Nobody wants Crime in there crew like good kids who want a future
This haters heart could stop,
Wait your good! not. The only people screamin crime is neighborhood watch

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Crime, u seem to like writing so keep doin' it, but u gotta direct your lines towards your opponent more. Text battling isn't the streets, u don't need to act hard n' talk about guns n' shit. Just think of witty shit on ur opponent. Read battles by the better dudes around here to get the idea. Sir, ur concepts were pretty inconsistent, some really played shit ilke the soul line, but u had a few lines which were aight. Tip tho, don't center ur verse, don't explain ur lines, and don't put lines in between. It just makes u look newbish and hurts the quality of ur verse. Ya got this tho for better punches.

Vote - Sir Smash'Alot