It sounded like you were freestyling almost and you started right in the middle of the beat. I can BARELY hear your voice, your quality ain't even that bad you have to work on your delivery, flow, presence and lyrics. All the open spaces between your verses and your chorus is un-necessary. For a first song, this is sometimes expected I disagree with those that make it seem like you are a lost cause. If you need tips or have questions, then hit me up.

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