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Old 11-04-06, 11:39 AM   #8
CyKo
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Quote:
Originally Posted by StackMann
so you think your lyrically inclined to challenge anyone.
man you have a better chance aiming at your dome wit my mini gun//
i mean you say that your making money,in different ways. but todays a new day an im comming to take your pay//
leave yo ass out on a sidewalk, your fuckin wit stackmann and im spitin the facts,
so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
ill have your head spining in every direction, like ready set, release stackmaans leathal inject, the infection has you weak to the point you cant spit, so stop trying, cause your verses are shit //
---no beef


1st bar: im not feelin this.... wasn't really standin out to me
2nd bar: uhhh....not feelin this either not really a punch....should have put something else as the second line.... because it was a filler
3rd bar: nope...mediocre ryhme schme was to simple....try chosin diffrent words....use better vocab
4th bar: this i feel was ur best bar....if u could have worded it better this would have been hot....
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