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Old 11-05-06, 02:59 AM   #11
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Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
decent.. seemed a bit random to feed off this particular punch for yours but wtvr
Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
i think you shoulda put a ? mark after "stretched as shit". decent flip

vs.

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
meh.. i'm sure this sort of thing has been used much better on him
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
both of the personals u used in this are pretty played on him.. somehow they combine and make something not too bad


this one is real close.. i'm ganna edge it to r. christensen for coming fresher.

v/ r. christ.
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