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Old 11-05-06, 03:05 AM   #8
Te Ora
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
u could've used this a lot better
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
if u'd called his punches "crap" in the set up or something i feel this would've hit better. this was only ever going to be mediocre imo tho.

vs.

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
ehh nah
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
i dunno.. this could've been alright with different wording.. but it just comes across at lame


v/ d.stroyer. pretty avg battle.. i feel d's lines had more potential so i'm scoring this to him.
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