damm, first you get a weak reply, then you get this bitch talking shit... lol... it's a joke ain't it!
Yo personally dawg, this here's too soft for my taste... though I did like this line... "I hit you with blind love, but now I wish you would have seen it"... I ain't that heartless...
Now alot of this (rhymes, wordplay, vocab) was pretty simple, that's a weak point, and also the flow could have been better paced... it lacks rhythm... in my opinion, cats don't usually take a liking to topics like this... so if you are posting something like it, you should try to make it as good as you can... and I know you can do better then this... just keep working on it man, peace

Peace