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Old 11-06-06, 03:50 AM   #13
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
IMO puns are getting really played out man. I don't think this was any differant.
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
Its alright, but at the same time its not really, a weak pun again.

vs.

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
Hey, pretty decent punch
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
Pretty decnt line here again. The wordplay is cool, perhaps it should go both ways, but its witty.

See, Imma go against the grain and go with L.I. I felt his lines had more potential than D.

V. L.I.
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