ya flow wuz mostly on point........but ur fell off at a couple points.......when u first started it off it wuz mad choppy.......when u take a slow fall u gotta come wit high energy or nice delivery.......but work on gettin ya flow more fluid.....ya had a couple of good lines.....ya like punnin on words.....not bad....

but quality wise u probrably gotta work wit what ya got........if ya got CEP 2.0 i could help ya out......

Hook - pretty funny i like da concept of it........

aiite man keep workin on ya flow and quality.........keep droppen.........

pz

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