this was pretty slick...

emotion and delivery were lacking... had there been more emotion I'd probably have believed it more... you're pretty much monotone through out the whole thing with a little inflection here and there...


as far as the verse... nice lines here and there... the iron man slick... professor x line was delivered pretty good... you went into a Camron flow half way through... um... it worked for you... cause it doesn't work for him... so big ups.