saddest factory is what im gon listen to.....

the first line sounded akward the never been good with boys i dunno why tho.....

your volume drops off signifantly fix that....umm the beg was the hook, not good for a hook cuz it seems to come off choppy....nothing that bad, turn your voices up....its still a good song with a good message i like when the beat drops that sounded good.....you got flow construction and lyrics down n all mostly its mixing here n you already said it wasnt that good, and the hook is good but not a hook someone would repeat w.o the song so maybe could be better still really good you know that tho, hope i helped a but with some opinions

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