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Old 11-07-06, 06:55 PM   #4
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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ya quality needs to be fixed up, some good wordplay and delivery on your wordplay makes me think you redid the freestyle over n over till you got it right, yea i know you did.....yea you sound a lil monotone...fix that up a bit homie.....good lyrics tho...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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