wtf, iunno wut it is but the flow is off beat on the 1st hook mayne. the others are str8 but some reason this 1st one is off. i like it, but after like the first 4 bars it starts to get off beat. 1st verse, flow is choppy as hell, gets sorta boring after a while, not really no style switches or nothin. i like you're delivery n voice tho, but ya flow is just choppy. 2nd verse, feelin this alot more. flow's on point, lyrics is sick lol not punchline type sick, just sounds good. maybe its the rhyme scheme im likin. delivery is good as well. fell off a bit at the end when you started to slow the flow down i think but besides that it's str8. ehh, iight track i guess

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