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ight so if this is possb. gon be on a video ill help ya out......
eq some more lows in the hook, your voice is a lil high on the beat sounds a tad whiney i know its not your fault but some more lows would help...
verses take your acca's and make a copy of them n work with some compression see if it helps cuz your low points fall off....not flow wise but volume wise......
3rd verse....emphacise the ride dirty line more with adlibs will have people go "oh"
all in all you know this is a tight track, im just helpin you out with some very minor stuff that if you tryin to push this track a lil further....for rv purposes you know its a 10/10....the set back i see hurting this track the most is the beat is kinda lulling....so maybe find some spots for some more "yeah yeah's" and adlibs....that could just be cuz im tired too......hope this helps brah
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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