u sound a lil whiny on the chorus....

i love ur delivery on this......ur flow....nice....got loads of emotion...its like ur basically talkin on the track....

but it looks like u had fun on this track

to me the chorus is ur downfall..... just a lil off....im not a club guy myself...but the uptempo beat and the way u spit to this formualted well.....was an enjoyable track honestly