"now u want me back"

i think the chorus at a certain point sounds really good........like the part where its like "now u want me back..." that part sounds good....the rest of the singin is pretty much off beat...like it wasnt fluid to where everything shouldve connected.....
voice is good tho.....just felt some insecurity there.....
the verse where ur rappin is hot tho....like ur sound.....like ur emotion and esp how u announciate ur words....swear man sounds like ur from cali.......no on really sounds like that unless theyre from cali....