for real, i dont live in the ghetto, hell im a farmboy who moved to the suburbs... gotta give you props for the fact that you are spittin about gangsters and all that and not sayin that "you run the hood" or you "got your block on lock"... i liked this one
"... but could u relate to a life full of sacrifice/ u try to do fo others but they turn around and stab yo back wit a knife"
even that happens in the burbs lol... the message is a bit hazy but i think i get it... ten times better than most of the stuff i read on here... keep rhymin

p.s. dont be all hateful on the posts raw... its not like you were the best lyricist right off the bat, or even after a few years work, or however long you been rappin... everyones got different styles and skills... just take it easy...