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Old 11-09-06, 06:25 PM   #14
Ysdat
Whys That?
 
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Intro is attention grabbing... beats ok, rey comes in nice, hooks cool. Rey your flows good "im not just another dumbass with marketing skills" < flow was off slightly there, but nothing overally noticable.
Your dubs cut off at random spots but meh, you layed it solid bro. good job.

Jay comes in nice, good combinationm rey with the deep voice jay a bit more high pitched. Good flow, lyrics all good... kids on side walks bar is cool.

jay on the hook doesnt do it complete justice, maybe both a you doing the hook at the end switching it up.

rey saying haters gonna hate jay saying next line... blah.. just wasnt feeling just jay on that hook.

Overall cool track... Maybe polish the hook a bit more.
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