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Old 11-10-06, 04:21 PM   #12
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vs.

Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Power bomb him in the dirt and have Stanza busted n' throwin up mud
You'd think he was gettin jumped in a gang,way he was throwin up blood
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge

^ the wording was a bit awkward in the second one, but haven't seen the idea before so i quoted it. your verse was top heavy on threats, but you came a lot better than he did so:


v/ sonny.
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