This was average at best. The multis look like...you're new to them.

Mac~in~the~trunk an Backin~it~up/
blastin~this~fuck for passin~me~looks/
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trunk, up, fuck, looks? No. A for effort.

I'm sick~of~this~shit so stop all that that bick~er~in~bitch/
I'll hunt ya ass down and graze ya grid~with~a~brick/
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Good.

yep im talkin~ta~you ill be robbin~ya~dames poppin~the~flame/
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talkin~ta~you doesn't go with anything. Fix.

step back hater what'chu starin~at~bitch?/
i aint a magician but i know a few disappear~in~tricks/
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starin, disappearin. Yeah, those don't rhyme.

My advice is...lose the "~~~~". I did them for a long time. Look you know you do multis, if they don't catch it, that's them. They're idiots if they don't catch'em. Stop separating multis by syllables, that's not correct multis. Even though I do multis perfect, I read the multis tutorial on here and it's actually pretty good. Read it. It'll give some good pointers. Another thing, don't come at me for my constructive criticism. You entitled this "multifest". Well a "multifest" wouldn't have received anything but positive feed if done correctly. Stay up.

-Skyll-

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