Quality on this track could've been better thus giving you alot more emotion for the listeners to hear

Flow - meh... not my style but it fit the beat well

Chorus was alright but sounded the same as the verses

your lyrics should've been planned out better, i mean with the style of flow you chose to use, you could've added a bit more to them to make them stand out more..

this track wasnt WOW, but like Q said.. you have potential - keep working on ways to bring out your quality more if thats all you have to work with.

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