ok, spoken word after those few bars are kinda gay... you just goin on about blah..weird laubgh and shit, but blah.

First verse, is ok.. "spines get crushing" ran out a breath there, which kinda wrecked those solid bars.
Shit talk is a ok touch I spose.
Second verse is ok, nice rhymes, flows stays on point. Some ok punches.
end a this verse is cool.
shit talks a bit stupid now..lol...
next verse is ok..mmmkkaaayy shits is gay
overall its cool.

RTF
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