the hook comes in. it's alright, but it sounds a little soft. you kinda fumbled over one part in your verse. your adlibs seem a little off in the first verse. the flow seems pretty nice. im digging the lyrical content. the lyrics are a little better in the second verse, but these adlibs are getting a little annoying. the beats ok. a little annoying though. the more i listen the more i like the chorus. not bad man.

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