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Old 11-12-06, 11:04 PM   #15
Te Ora
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your done. guarantee you wont live
n hand you this La, like im visitin your crib
^nah
comin into this battle, u were in for a spanking
n when peeps ask why ur here in the first place
..............its the closest ull be to the top of the rankings
^didn't like the wording.. not a bad idea tho

vs.

Comparison punches...? Listen you're gonna get mocked
I'll close your chest................like I've got this bitch on lock
^nah
I believe you were late bitch, wake your wack as up
On a scale of 1-500...you'll be staying fat as fuck
^ wording could've made this decent

v/ L.I. pretty close.. but i liked the idea behind his poorly worded punch more than ab0ve. pretty avg battle tho.
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