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Old 11-12-06, 11:45 PM   #2
Enygma
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Your best song and no replies huh......probably no one wanting to tell you the truth.....lol.


But anyway, this is some pretty nice shit you got here man. Production sounds nice. You get a bit off beat at the very end of the first verse. The hook could stand a bit of layering to separate it from the verses instead of just the pitch of your voice. Second verse sounds like a different voice than the first verse. I wasn't feeling the second verse as much as the first. Hook would really be dope as fuck if you layered it more man.......and it could use a third verse, unless you were waiting for me to rip that shit to threads


Anyway, definitely a nice ass track.....I just wanted to give you some honest feed before the parade of "DAMN THAT'S DOPE" and "NICE TRACK" comments
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