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Old 11-12-06, 11:51 PM   #4
Ebircs
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yea, this beats ill

1st dude....quality is a bit iffy....writing good...kinda have the problem is have/had w pushing off flow for lyrics...gota get to a medium...left hook right thing, kinda played but used well....streem ocean line nice, i had one close to it...hooks not bad...2nd dudes nice..not as lyrical, but flows decent...went a totaly different direction then you..not a bad verse tho.....
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