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Old 11-12-06, 11:57 PM   #2
Ebircs
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iight, beats coming in decent so far.....intros kinda bit long....

not feelin the hook...kinda sound like mugs from cypriss hill....

ur verse is a bit low...and quality kinda muffled....flows nice...kinda hard to hear what ur saying, but i like the message from what im hearing...hooks still ehhh....libs r nice here...lol slave ship line was kinda tupacish...delevery an't real strong...u should switch something up once in a while, cuz it seems repititivesomething to keep ppls attention nah mean?


not a bad track tho
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