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Old 11-13-06, 03:46 AM   #6
Ebircs
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ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/


^^^ was awfull man....one hell of a poorly worded, uncreative punch....lame....you lines r to long....they wouldnt flow at all on a beat...ur vocab is lame at best...ur uncreative...bars w set up awkward..rhyme scheme is nonexsistant .....AND u act like it's good...AND its like four bars....of trash.............

YOU sir,,,SUCK
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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