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Old 11-13-06, 04:08 AM   #8
Adam
 
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The Beat intro is too long in my opinion. It's an alright beat though, gets your head bobbin' once it starts going. The hook is alright, I don't think the song should have started off with it though, cause its sounds a lot better when it comes in after the first verse. I dig the first verse, you got a good flow over this beat, some good lines. The second verse is fire, wicked lyrics. I like the hook a lot when it comes after the first and second verses, but I'm not a fan of it at the start. Song fades out cool..

I think if you cleaned up the intro a bit, made the beat intro a bit shorter and found something to put there instead of the hook at the start this would be a really dope song. I've already repeated it a few times..

Good shit bro..
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