yo this is a pretty hard song...sounds like somthing like The Dips would make.....iono sounds like a dipset beat! The flow is hot..and of course as always punchlines and lyrics are crazy my dude... the only thing I think you should do is change the way you deliverd the hook....should've put a lil more into it..and this would've been 200 times better..but its still hot and Zone's right this beat is really hard
for word could you rtf on this -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235928