^^^co sign........generic......verrrry generic......u got the basics down.....aka the cake....now u need some sprinkles and some icing and maybe a few candles to decorate it....in rap terms...

metaphors....similies....wordplay.....punchlines.. ..

my diss towards the next generation star trekkies....is a good example of what im tryin to say.......see what i did...and apply to urself...best way to learn is by example sometimes....thats how i did