aiight peepin....

beat in.....

aiight man much better than last track i heard... but like flow don't match beat. For basic flow try to do it so that all the rhymin' words hit the snare, if you know what that is. The like clappin' shit.....well on thsi beat sound more like drum.

also try and up the emotion a bit too yo. Like here it's just monotone. like spit it angry like if you want, like yell a lil.. but word def better than last one I heard man. so step in right direction. keep practicing yo.

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