beats cool, real ambient.

qual's on point. the content is on point and you keep it real, i just don't liek the packaging of the message, i like things more lyrical to say the same thing. some minute points you have a jumble of sound where it's impossible to make out anything being said. smetimes you gave up on the rhymeschme like at the end of the first verse where the last line didn't rhyme with anything. def don't wanna end a verse on a bad note liek that when doing the right thing is so easy. just by listening to how it's laid out i can tell what your frame of mind was when you wrote it. i like the concepts and what's being discussed in the song and i think it should be rewritten and layed over this beat again.


payce

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