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Old 11-15-06, 03:00 PM   #2
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Ill listen to a joint...spit fire...

beat is aight not my shit....

volume is a lil loud....quality is good...I like ya energy but the shit is too loud..its hurting my ears lol..but other than that flow is good and delivery is real nice..

Hook i think some people will feel it, I don't know why but I ain't rlly feeling it but no hate....lyrics are pretty good..I like ya second verse the best...

aight u pushed me to listen to sumthing else to push ya style..so word up..

it will be ok (momma)

first verse...qual aint as good as the other 1...here vocals a lil low I can't rlly hear the words..but ya flow is decent here..not as good as 1st...i feel ya emotion..and ya direction with this song just think u cudda done so much better...it seems u musta recorded this song a while before u recorded the first one...I actually like the hook here....you can hold a melody...

keep doing u...1
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