Better THAN You!
|
IP:
Ah It cut off the part for Ickris.
Ickris verse was kinda basic, lines were stretched and that attempt at complexity and punchs didnt connect all that well. Both failed in that aspect. Ickris lines had a little bit of potential, but you need to work on the basics and structure your lines better to make them flow right. Otherwise, just keep practicing at it man.
|